Together with your group, examine each paragraph in the model draft for its relationship to the thesis, unity, coherence, and adequate development of the paragraph's main idea.
Create a new Google Doc in which you explain briefly how each paragraph might be improved. You can be as brief as possible, but more complex problems might require a bit more explanation. Each group need only create one document.
Conceptual and organizational concerns stages. Trying to figure out how I want to layout all the information in order to draw in the audience. i already have a thesis so now I just have to get all the paragraphs to relate and also explain my central thesis.
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